I decided to redo the whole thing. It is same as usual, I will create or remake the "funny" situations I bumped to through my favourite toy of all time : Transformers. Same thing, only more gay, more swearing and more lamer.
Friday, September 29, 2006
Black & White
Part 1 : The Begining Superlink Optimus Prime holds a very deep grudge against Roller, but he is interrupted by 2 of his alter egos..........
Some lil comments & suggestions below ^^ - any way to make the speech viewable instead of having to load each page? i'm lazy :P but if not its ok too... - slight grammatical issues; maybe if u put in more cursing/slang it wont be noticeable at all? XD
2 Comments:
At 1:29 AM, Unknown said…
Not bad at all ;)
Really enjoyed reading it. hehehe
Some lil comments & suggestions below ^^
- any way to make the speech viewable instead of having to load each page? i'm lazy :P but if not its ok too...
- slight grammatical issues; maybe if u put in more cursing/slang it wont be noticeable at all? XD
wonders how the story will continue...
props for putting the time & effort in!
At 7:02 PM, Yung Jie said…
So perhaps I should increase the font larger ? Will try . Thanks for the comment !! :D
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